Your decision

Once in a daydream
As a summer evening passed
I offered you our future
But you kept choosing your past

2 thoughts on “Your decision”

This is such a strong piece. The first 3 lines are soft and dreamy, the last one packs a punch. Wonderful work – not an excess word in it.

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2 thoughts on “Your decision”